对学生兼职工作的看法

Students＇ Attitude towards Part Time Jobs
   Some students think doing part time jobs is helpful for their present life and future career. First, while earning some pocket money, students may get some praetieal experience and training. development. Thus they favour doing part time jobs.
   However, some students are aware that the costs of part time jobs can outweigh their benefits. First, working erts (分散) students＇ attention away from their books. Second, these students sacrifice study time, have less time to join classmates in college activities. Third, students are under strong pressure and burden from both study and part time job. In a word, part time work can have some strong negative influences on study.
   College students should take a more mature attitude towards part time jobs. Learning is a very tiring full time job. Students may find major related and knowledge intensive jobs during vacations. If it isn＇t a must for financial reasons, students should be cautious(谨慎)a about doing part＇line jobsg Competition for jobs aftergraduation is fierce(激烈的) and students who don＇t make good use of their college years risk losing out in the career race.
范文分析  第二段在论述“大学生成熟的看法”时，如果处理不当，极易造成与第一、二段内容重合或毫无新意可言，但在本段却避免了落入俗套。通过一分为二的细致分析，明确、深化了作者对大学生打零工问题的态度和认识。结句具有“凡人警句”的力度。